Audience Feedback on First Draft

I showed the first edit of our music video to our teachers and peers to gather some feedback which might influence me what to improve on for the final edit of the music video.

There was obviously a few aspects which I wanted to achieve myself but I was curious to know what other people thought about it.


Feedback received:

"I like how there is a noticeable split between the shots of Alex and Jade together and of Alex on his own"

"The lyrics work well but some of the them don't fit as well as others within the black borders of the video. Some of them also need to be smoother." 

"The transitions at the beginning might look more effective if they are smoother and more in time"

I am going to look at this feedback and our draft videos again to try and improve them, this should result in a more professional product.