First Edit With The Lyrics...

Shown above is the first edit of our music video which includes the lyrics which I have previously mentioned (Inspired by 'The Chainsmokers' music video to 'Closer')

The edit is unfinished and already there are a few things which we have picked up on which could be changed and finer edited to improve the quality, however, we are rather pleased with how it has turned out considering it was our first draft.

What do we like about this first draft?

• The lyrics fit with our shots and tie it together rather well
• The lyrics are in time with the audio 
• The drone shots are effective and the lyrics stand out over the top of them. 

What we would like to improve to this first draft?

• At times the lyrics move into the black borders around our video, this is something which we could adjust when we go to edit again. We have added the black borders, therefore, the programme Ollie has used to design the lyrics has assumed that it can use the whole area of the screen. 
• The quality of the sound does not appear to be as good as it was when we were editing, this could be due to the way it was exported. When we edit again we will have to make sure we have set the video to export and render and the highest quality; this will take a longer amount of time to export, however, the quality will be significantly better.